Systems Engineer (SE) Motivation Statement | Examples for No-Experience to Senior
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Authors: Shusaku Yosa
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Category: Job Search Preparation & Interview Tips, Job Change
Authors: Shusaku Yosa
When applying for a Systems Engineer (SE) role, what hiring managers probe more deeply than your skills or experience is "why SE?" and "why our company?" This is because the IT industry has high talent mobility, and recruiters use the motivation statement to gauge whether you are a person who won't quickly quit, and whether you can perform at their company.
This article systematically explains the framework for writing an SE motivation statement, the elements it must contain, and the NG (bad) examples to avoid. It also covers, by case, motivation statements for those with no IT experience, second-year career changers, liberal arts new graduates, experienced engineers, and applicants to SES, in-house product companies, and SIers. With ready-to-adapt templates and example responses to interview deep-dive questions, this one article should carry you from document screening through final interviews.
An SE role is technical, yet involves customer-facing work, requirements definition, and team development across a broad surface area, so a motivation statement can reveal aptitude (or lack of it) at a glance. First, understand the angles recruiters check from.
A motivation statement that satisfies all four substantially boosts document-screening pass rates for both newcomers and experienced engineers. Missing even one tends to get you judged as "someone who could go anywhere."
Being an SE is not simply about writing code. Upstream you need to hear out users and business owners; downstream you need to collaborate with team members and vendors to get the system running. So recruiters try to read, from your motivation statement, not only your technical drive but also your logical thinking, communication, and tenacity.
"SE" covers many company types, and the working style and ideal profile vary widely. To make your motivation statement compelling, understanding where the company you are applying to sits in this landscape is essential.
Stating which type the company falls under, and what attracts you about that type, signals the depth of your company research.
SE work spans requirements definition, basic design, detailed design, implementation, testing, and operations/maintenance. Domains are also segmented -- application SE, infrastructure SE, embedded SE, in-house SE -- and stating explicitly which domain you are aiming for adds persuasiveness. Be specific, with phrases like "I want to take on upstream phases" or "I want to deepen specialization with infrastructure as my axis."
Motivation statements written off the cuff tend to come out abstract. Use the following four-step framework and you can write a coherent one whether you are a newcomer or experienced engineer.
Writing in this order naturally flows from job-category understanding to company understanding to self-understanding to future vision, producing text that's easy for recruiters to read.
Start with the conclusion: "The reason I'm applying to your company is XX." If you postpone the conclusion, the most important point fails to land and the statement doesn't stick. In the XX, put a phrase grounded in the company's distinctive features -- business domain, tech stack, culture, growth opportunity, etc.
For resumes and work histories, 300-400 characters (in Japanese) is readable; for free-form web application fields, 400-600 characters works well. For verbal interview responses, aim for an amount you can deliver in 60 seconds -- roughly 250-300 characters worth of content.
Here are SE motivation statements by applicant background. Rather than copying them verbatim, swap in the actual company name, business, and your own episode.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I'm drawn to your training system that lets even newcomers take on upstream work, and to the business domain of contributing directly to customers' business improvement through enterprise systems. In my previous role at a retail store, I had the experience of semi-automating an ordering process that had been managed on paper and Excel, by building my own spreadsheet with GAS, and felt firsthand how IT can fundamentally change how people work. From that experience, I came to want to work as an SE who designs systems with a deep understanding of the business, and I'm currently studying Java and SQL through Progate and Udemy and building a simple inventory management app as a personal project. After joining, I want to solidify the fundamentals through training while leveraging my strength of understanding customer operations early on, and within five years become an upstream SE who can handle requirements definition independently.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I'm drawn to the chance to take on large-scale system overhauls as an upstream SE specialized in the financial domain, and I resonate with your culture of respecting each employee's discretion. In my previous role at a bank front desk, a key issue was the time spent serving customers in an environment where paper slips and legacy systems coexisted. I have experience automating a checklist with macros and cutting the processing time per case by about 20%. That experience drew me strongly to the SE role of getting deep into the business and solving issues structurally. In the six months since leaving, I passed the Fundamental Information Technology Engineer exam and have been self-studying SQL and Python. At your company, I want to grow both financial domain understanding and IT fundamentals in parallel, and within three years become someone who can take on upstream requirements definition as a financial SE.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I'm strongly drawn to your culture of providing systematic technical training even to liberal arts graduates while letting young employees engage with customers early on. I studied behavioral economics in an economics program, and from the experience of building a web form for survey collection in my seminar using HTML and JavaScript, I became interested in IT's power to change human behavior. I also have experience streamlining attendance tabulation with Excel functions while reviewing shift management together with the manager during a three-year part-time job at a cafe. I believe I can demonstrate, as an SE, the combination of "the ability to understand people and operations" and "the ability to combine the technologies I've learned." After joining, I want to first earn the Fundamental Information Technology Engineer certification, and within five years grow into an SE who can handle upstream work in the financial and public sectors.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I'm drawn to your strong track record in manufacturing-sector core systems and to your development policy of entrusting upstream work even to younger engineers. At my current large SIer, I have spent three years on maintenance and enhancement of an order management system for the distribution sector, and over the last year I have moved into basic design. But because the organization is large and I stay on one phase for an extended period, it is hard to experience the full flow from requirements through operations in one piece. In an environment like yours, where a single SE shepherds a project from start to finish, I believe I can sharpen the kind of proposal ability that reflects both the intent of the design and the realities of operations. I want to apply the SQL tuning and customer-facing experience I built up as an immediate contributor, and within three years stand up as a project leader (PL).
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I'm strongly drawn to your development style of continuously improving your in-house product based on user feedback, and to the culture of letting engineers participate in technology selection. At my current SIer, I have five years of business systems development experience in C#, but client requirements often complete in a single delivery, and I came to feel it's hard to get the sense of growing a product over time. Personally, I've been developing and publishing a task management app in TypeScript and React, and I get genuine satisfaction from the cycle of receiving user feedback and improving features. I am also a user of your SaaS product myself, and I strongly want to contribute to its quality and improvement speed from the development side. After joining, I'd like to start on the backend and eventually be involved in product-wide tech selection as a tech lead.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I'm drawn to the fact that you handle many on-premise-to-cloud migration projects, and that I can engage from upstream on both AWS and Azure. In my current role, I have spent three years on internal network operations and maintenance, and obtained the AWS Certified Solutions Architect - Associate. I also led a small project to migrate the company's on-premise AD to Azure AD, and held the migration downtime to zero. At your company I want to take on upstream design of large-scale cloud migrations, and within five years obtain a professional-level certification, becoming a cloud architect who can design infrastructure that supports customers' business growth.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that I deeply resonate with your management stance of treating systems not as a cost center but as a means of business growth, in an in-house SE role at an operating company. At my current SIer, I have six years of experience developing core systems for the distribution and retail sectors and have handled the full flow from requirements definition through operations. But I increasingly want to engage with my own company's business for the long term and grow the system together with the operations -- not stop at "the system is live, we're done." Your company is continuously driving DX of store operations and offers a position where one can evolve the system while listening to both store and head office. Bringing the vendor management and business-understanding skills I built up in my previous roles, I want to contribute early on to core system overhaul projects after joining.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that you combine in-house training and project-choice assignment, so even from a young age I can confidently build skills across diverse industries and technologies. In a previous administrative role, I handled RPA (UiPath) and reduced workload by 60 hours per month by automating routine tasks. From that experience, I came to aspire to be an SE who changes operations with technology. Your training program systematically covers the fundamentals of Java, SQL, and cloud, and the assignment interview lets new hires voice their preferences -- which I believe is the most growth-friendly environment for someone without prior IT experience. Within three years of joining, I want to experience development projects across several industries, then identify my strengths and take on upstream work or in-house product development.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that remote work and flex-time are established as the default working style, which I see as the ideal environment for building a long-term career as an SE. At my previous role at a staffing company, I handled over 300 candidate interviews per year, and joined a chatbot deployment project to streamline our work by integrating with the in-house CRM. While organizing system requirements, I became strongly interested in the SE role, self-studied Python and SQL, and rolled out a simple data analysis tool internally. At your company, I want to leverage my industry knowledge of staffing while growing my specialization over a 5- to 10-year horizon. After joining I want to first deepen my understanding of core systems as an in-house SE, and in the future engage from the requirements definition phase as an upstream SE.
The reason I'm applying to your company is that you actively develop former sales people into upstream SEs, and I'm confident I can grow by multiplying my customer-facing strength with technical ability. At my current IT trading company, over five years I have handled proposals and deployment support of enterprise systems to 20 major manufacturers. While advancing proposals, I have felt the frustration of not being able to translate customer requirements precisely into the technical side, and I came to want to engage from the requirements definition phase as an SE who carries the technology myself. After leaving my current role, I obtained Java Silver and AWS CLF, and I'm currently building a simple attendance management app with Spring Boot. I want to apply the industry knowledge and proposal skills I gained in sales to your company's system proposal and requirements definition work, and within three years stand up as an upstream SE.
What the examples above have in common is that they satisfy all of the following three elements. After writing your own motivation statement, check that all three are present.
"Because I was interested in IT" alone falls short on persuasiveness. Include at least one origin experience of your own -- improving a process, self-teaching yourself enough to ship an app, a moment when technology helped someone, etc. It doesn't have to be grand: small wins like an Excel macro or a GAS automation are plenty.
Try to extract three distinctive features about the company from sources such as the corporate site, careers page, employee interviews, financial filings, and the tech blog. If you connect any of business domain, tech stack, training philosophy, culture, or strategy to your own preferences, it will read as something that can't be reused at another company.
"I want to grow" alone reads as passive. Pair time horizon with position -- "within three years I'll independently handle basic design," "PL in five years," "architect in ten" -- and include planned certifications and a learning plan to also signal learning drive.
Below are three patterns that tend to lose points in document screening or interviews.
I want a job I can do for a long time by acquiring a marketable skill, so I'm applying for an SE role.
-> A phrase a lot of SE applicants write, and it leaves the impression that you have a shallow understanding of the role. Push one step further and verbalize "why a marketable skill via SE" and "why not a programmer or another IT role."
Your company offers remote work and a high salary range, so I'd like to work there.
-> Compensation is an honest part of motivation, but placing it at the center risks the judgment that "this person will jump elsewhere if the conditions are better." Even if you touch on conditions, build the body of the statement around sympathy with the business, technology, and culture.
I want to take on a challenge in the growing IT industry, so I'm applying to your company.
-> Industry-wide admiration alone makes you "a person who would be fine anywhere." Include at least one specific noun from the target company -- product name, service name, tech stack, or signature project.
What you wrote in your motivation statement is almost certain to be probed in interviews. Organize common questions and your approach to each.
Answer honestly, but stay consistent with your axis. Saying something like "I'm focused on companies where I can directly contribute to customer business improvement through enterprise systems" anchors industry/domain consistency. Have a separate, concrete reason ready for why this company is your first choice.
Concretely show your efforts so far -- languages you're studying, certifications already earned, apps you have built. An answer like "I've completed 6 courses on Progate and 30 hours on Udemy, and I'm currently building an inventory management app as my portfolio" pairs volume with content and reads as persuasive.
Answering at three horizons -- 3, 5, and 10 years -- conveys planning. Prepare a structure that aligns with the company's career path: an SE who can lead basic design in three years, PL in five, architect or consultant in ten.
A motivation statement is not a standalone document -- it's evaluated only after being consistent with your self-PR, work history, and resume overall. Your self-PR and motivation statement in particular need to point in the same direction. For self-PR writing, see "The complete guide to writing a self-PR: examples by job category and experience," and if you're focusing on communication skills, also see "Communication skills self-PR: 10 example patterns that land."
Finally, here are the key points for writing an SE motivation statement:
Using the 10 example patterns introduced here as templates and combining the company's business, technology, and culture with your own experience, strengths, and future vision, you can shift the impression from "someone who could go anywhere" to "someone who would thrive here." As a first step toward raising your document-screening pass rate, start by writing down one origin experience of your own.
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